Zoos: Education and Conservation โ Band 8 Model Answer
Animals ยท IELTS Task 2 ยท Target: Band 8
Task Question
Some people think animals should not be kept in zoos. Others argue that zoos are important for education and conservation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The zoo question forces a confrontation between two genuine values: the moral weight of individual animal welfare and the utilitarian calculus of species preservation.Examiner noteNames two competing ethical frameworks directly โ Band 8 analytical sophistication and LR. Neither can be dismissed; the question is how to weigh them.
The animal welfare case against zoos has become significantly stronger as the science of animal cognition has advanced. Elephants demonstrate grief, long-term memory and complex social bonds; great apes display theory of mind and cultural transmission; cetaceans exhibit individualised identity and abstract reasoning.Examiner noteThree-part parallel structure with specific, factual examples โ Band 8 GRA and TA. Confining such animals in spaces that cannot accommodate these capacities inflicts a measurable cognitive and psychological costExaminer notePrecise, confident claim โ Band 8 LR. that the welfare-oriented objection is right to take seriously.
Against this, the conservation argument carries genuine force for a specific subset of species.Examiner note"Against this" โ clean contrastive opening phrase. Band 8 CC. Without zoo-managed breeding programmes, the Arabian oryx, California condor and black-footed ferret would be biologically extinct. The IUCN recognises ex situ conservation as a legitimate and necessary component of species recovery plansExaminer notePrecise institutional language โ Band 8 LR. for animals facing imminent wild extinction.
The resolution I find most defensible is a tiered frameworkExaminer notePrecise policy language. : highly cognitively complex animals โ great apes, elephants, cetaceans โ should not be kept in conventional zoo settings, and existing populations should be transitioned to large-scale sanctuary environmentsExaminer noteSpecific alternative โ "sanctuary" not just "better zoos". . For other species, particularly those in recovery programmes, well-regulated captive conservation remains ethically justifiable and practically necessary.
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