IELTSWriting Task 2267 words

News Media and Entertainment โ€” Band 7 Model Answer

Media ยท IELTS Task 2 ยท Target: Band 7

Band 7Overall Score

Task Question

Some people think the main purpose of news media is to educate and inform. However, many believe the media is now too focused on entertainment. To what extent do you agree?

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The line between information and entertainment has become increasingly blurredExaminer noteThe metaphor "blurred" applied to an abstract boundary โ€” above-average Lexical Resource for Band 7. in the modern media landscape. I largely agree that entertainment priorities have come to dominate news production, often at the expense of journalistic depth.

Contemporary news outlets face intense commercial pressure to attract and retain audiencesExaminer noteAccurate and precise โ€” "commercial pressure" is a key concept in media studies. Band 7 LR. in a fragmented digital environment. This has encouraged the prioritisation of stories that are emotionally engaging or sensational over those that are substantively important. Political journalism, in particular, has shifted towards personality-driven narratives and performative conflictExaminer notePrecise noun phrase โ€” concise and accurate. rather than policy analysis.

However, it would be inaccurate to claim that serious journalism has disappeared entirely.Examiner noteBalanced hedge before the counterpoint โ€” demonstrates the candidate can argue with nuance. Investigative journalism continues to expose corruption and hold power to account in meaningful ways. Public broadcasters in many countries maintain editorial standards that prioritise accuracy over viralityExaminer noteThe contrast between "accuracy" and "virality" is precise and relevant โ€” Band 7 LR. , funded by licence fees or government grants designed to insulate them from market pressures.

In conclusion, while quality journalism persists in certain outlets, the dominant commercial logic of the media industry undeniably pushes towards entertainment. Regulatory frameworks and public funding models are necessary to preserve journalism's democratic function.

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