IELTSWriting Task 2291 words

Hosting Major Sporting Events โ€” Band 8 Model Answer

Sports ยท IELTS Task 2 ยท Target: Band 8

Band 8Overall Score

Task Question

Hosting international sporting events such as the Olympics brings many benefits to the host country. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The economics of mega-event hosting have been subjected to rigorous academic scrutiny over the past two decades, and the findings are, for advocates of Olympic bidding, deeply uncomfortable.Examiner noteOpens by signalling academic grounding and forecasting the essay's critical stance โ€” Band 8 TA and LR. I argue that, for the vast majority of potential host nationsExaminer notePrecise qualification โ€” avoids overgeneralisation. Band 8 LR., the costs of hosting consistently outweigh the benefits.

The case for hosting rests on three pillars: infrastructure legacy, tourism uplift and national prestige. Each deserves scrutiny. Infrastructure investment would be beneficial if it were directed by public need; in practice, it is directed by the event's logistical requirementsExaminer notePrecise conditional critique of a specific mechanism. Band 8 TA., producing stadia in cities that need hospitals and motorways servicing venues that will be visited once. Tourism uplift is routinely projected optimistically and delivered disappointingly โ€” the Oxford Olympics Study found that Games consistently overshoot cost projections by an average of 172%. National prestige effects are real but impossible to monetise and trivially achieved through means that do not cost tens of billions of dollarsExaminer notePrecise evaluation of an intangible benefit. Band 8 LR. .

The rare exceptions โ€” Barcelona 1992, arguably Los Angeles 1984 โ€” illuminate the conditions under which hosting can succeedExaminer noteUsing exceptions to identify the conditions for success โ€” sophisticated analytical move. Band 8 TA. : existing infrastructure capacity, commercially driven organisation, and realistic rather than aspirational budgets. These conditions are absent in most bids.

For wealthy cities with surplus infrastructure capacity, a carefully managed Games may deliver net benefit. For developing nations subordinating social investment to sporting spectacleExaminer notePrecise gerund phrase. Band 8 GRA., it is a gamble with poor people's money against uncertain returns.

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