IELTSWriting Task 2273 words

Grandparents Raising Grandchildren โ€” Band 7 Model Answer

Family ยท IELTS Task 2 ยท Target: Band 7

Band 7Overall Score

Task Question

In many countries, grandparents are increasingly raising their grandchildren instead of parents. What are the causes of this trend? What are the effects on the children and on society?

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A notable demographic shift in many developed and developing countriesExaminer noteNoun phrase opener โ€” varies sentence structure beyond "There is/are". Band 7 GRA. is the rising number of grandparents serving as primary caregivers for their grandchildren. This essay examines the causes of this phenomenon and its broader effects.

Several factors underpin this trendExaminer notePrecise verb-noun collocation โ€” "underpin" is more academic than "explain" or "cause". . High rates of parental divorce and family breakdown can leave children without a stable two-parent household, prompting grandparents to step in. In some cases, parents struggle with substance abuse, mental health issues or incarcerationExaminer noteThree-item list covering distinct causes โ€” demonstrates range and detail for Task Achievement., rendering them unable to care for their children safely. Economic pressures that force parents to work abroad, particularly in developing nations, also drive this pattern.

The effects on children are mixed.Examiner noteShort transitional sentence โ€” effectively signals the shift from causes to effects. Band 7 CC. On the positive side, grandparents often provide stable, loving environments enriched by life experience. However, children may struggle emotionally with feelings of abandonment by their parents. Grandparents who are elderly may also lack the energy required for active child-rearingExaminer notePrecise infinitive phrase โ€” shows grammatical range., potentially affecting the children's development.

At the societal level, this trend places strain on older citizens who expected retirement to bring reduced responsibilities. It also signals deeper problems within family and social support structures that governments should address through improved childcare, mental health and social welfare systems.

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