Grandparents Raising Grandchildren โ Band 8 Model Answer
Family ยท IELTS Task 2 ยท Target: Band 8
Task Question
In many countries, grandparents are increasingly raising their grandchildren instead of parents. What are the causes of this trend? What are the effects on the children and on society?
The phenomenon of "grandfamilies" โ households where grandparents assume primary parenting responsibilities โ is no longer a statistical anomaly but a structural feature of family life in many societies.Examiner noteIntroduces a technical term ("grandfamilies") and characterises the phenomenon precisely โ Band 8 LR and TA. Understanding its causes reveals much about the fault linesExaminer noteMetaphorical use โ "fault lines" is evocative and precise. Band 8 LR. running through contemporary social policy.
The causes cluster around two distinct patterns. The first involves parental incapacity due to substance dependency, mental illness or custodial sentencesExaminer notePrecise legal and clinical vocabulary โ Band 8 LR. โ conditions that are more prevalent in communities experiencing entrenched poverty and that child welfare systems are frequently too under-resourced to address proactively. The second pattern is economic migrationExaminer notePrecise compound noun. : in countries such as the Philippines and Romania, large-scale labour export has created a generation of children raised by grandparents while their parents remit wages from abroad.
The effects on children are deeply ambivalentExaminer note"Ambivalent" signals a nuanced both-sides view in a single word โ Band 8 LR. . Grandparents often provide security, warmth and cultural continuity that bureaucratic foster care cannot replicate. Yet children may internalise narratives of parental abandonment, and grandparents โ however devoted โ may be physically and emotionally ill-equipped for the demands of contemporary child-rearing, from digital literacy to navigating secondary education systems.
Societally, the trend exposes the inadequacy of welfare systems premised on the nuclear family as the default caregiving unit. Policy responses that support kinship carers through financial allowances, respite care and legal recognition are not luxuries but structural necessities.Examiner noteConfident policy recommendation that closes the essay decisively โ Band 8 TA.
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